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 | Nobody  [13+] A Parolee meets Nobody  |
| Hello Chrys O'Shea! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones"  This is a good story that touches the heart in more ways than one. It's a creative and imaginative story with a chilling plot.The Title and Description - Perfect title for this story. It fits the plot in multiple ways. The description caught my attention and urged me to read on! The Storyline/Plot - A woman gets out of jail and gets on a bus heading for her destination. The bus stops at a restaurant. She goes in for a hot bowl of soup, on a cold, snowy day when she meets someone that will touch her heart and rattle her at the same time. Will she believe the truth? The Characters - Your writing allows the parolee's personality to shine through. Though she's quiet and reserved, she also has a very kind heart and is not afraid of helping others. We can feel the little boy's sadness and loneliness through your words. The Setting - You do a good job with the descriptions and details, so the reader can easily envision each scene as we read. What I Liked Best - The ending. It's a great twist ending. I also like how the title and the beginning of the story come full circle. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed it.  Tracey"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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