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The Portrait Open in new Window. [13+]
A boy goes off to war... (900 words)
by Amethyst Snow Angel Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Amethyst Snow Angel! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* Oh, that was such a good story. You did a wonderful job with the prompt. The prompt reminded me of Ebenezer Scrooge. It's nice that you took the story on a totally different path. Congratulations on your win. Your story deserved it!

The Title and Description - Good title that fits the story nicely. The description says all it needs to say. It was enough to urge me to read on.

The Characters - You did a wonderful job showing the love the father and son shared. The father's loneliness and desperation to see his son also shine through your words. The son's love for the father comes through his actions and words. The kindness of both is seen by allowing the orphan, Ralph, to become a part of the family.

The Setting - Nice job on writing the descriptions and details enough so that the reader can easily envision each scene as they read.

What I Liked The Best - I liked the whole story. I also liked the strong bond of love shown between the father and the son, so much so that nothing could stop them from being together. I also liked the kindness shown in allowing the orphan, Ralph, to move in. That also meant the father wouldn't be alone.

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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