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Paddy McGinty's Ghost Open in new Window. [13+]
Paddy inherits a fortune. 3rd in Senior Center Forum, February 2024.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Beholden! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* Oh, no! This was a good story, with a surprise ending I didn't see coming. *Laugh* Poor guy. I can see your wry humor coming through this story.

The Title and Description - Great title that goes perfectly with the story. Good description that urged me to read on. Congratulations on winning third in the Senior Center Forum. You deserved it!

The Storyline/Plot - A guy who just inherited some money from his aunt, stops in a pug to have a few drinks with his buds. A very creative and imaginative tale.

The Characters - You do such a wonderful job with the characters. Their personalities come out strongly through your words. I love the easy-going, jovial, and giving personality of the main character. Excellent job!

The Setting - Beautiful job on giving enough descriptions and details so that the reader can envision each scene as they read. Well done!

What I Liked Best - The camaraderie between all of the friends drinking at the bar. You did an amazing job making that scene so life-like. And of course, the marvelous, surprising ending. I love twist endings, and this one certainly does not disappoint!

Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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