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 The Standish House Open in new Window. [E]
They tell stories about that house at the end of the street. Were they right?
by Nanapockets Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello Nanapockets

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion, courtesy of the "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window. activity.


*Penw* Positives

I like the detail and description of the story leading up to the end. For such a short piece, you managed to fit a lot of sensory detail in, which really helped paint a vivid picture for the reader.


*Penw* Suggestions

The ending, for me, felt a little bit like it just abruptly stopped without a satisfying conclusion. I would have liked to have seen a little more closure to the story; an ending with a bit of finality.


*Penw* Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable short story and I thought it was an entertaining read. Nice work!


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