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Given: Apr 22, 2024 at 6:35pm
Length: 612 Characters |
589 w/o WritingML
An old man gets on a train, and thinks about his life as the train moves along the tracks. He thinks about his wife and children as things move past him, reflecting upon things that had happened. However, things soon come to an end, and as it turns out, this is his last train ride of all.
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Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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