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The Last Train Ticket Open in new Window. [E]
An old train and old memories
by James Vogner Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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An old man gets on a train, and thinks about his life as the train moves along the tracks. He thinks about his wife and children as things move past him, reflecting upon things that had happened. However, things soon come to an end, and as it turns out, this is his last train ride of all.

Characters
I liked how the characters were described, both the current present ones, and those not there.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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