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 The Exorcism of First Baptist Open in new Window. [ASR]
A satire of a pastor's attempt to save his church from Satan, sound equipment, and women.
by James Vogner Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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"You're lucky we're in a church!" - Indeed!

Well, this certainly has an unexpected ending. You have a Pastor, whose church has been having a number of issues lately. Thus, he comes to the conclusion that Satan has somehow managed to enter the house of worship in order to cause folks to turn to sin, somehow. Thus, he tries to root Him out. Problem is, he tries a little too hard.

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Oh, I have to laugh at the exchange between the Pastor and the cellphone woman.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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