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The Shadow Weaver Open in new Window. [13+]
"The path to redemption is paved with thorns, Shadow Weaver. Are you willing to bleed?"
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello GERVIC! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* And a child shall lead them... Great story with a well-written, complex main character.

The Title and Description - Fabulous title that drew me to your writing. The description is vivid and evokes visions of a bit of what the story may be about, urging me to read on!

The Storyline/Plot - The Shadow Weaver, an evil being, the making of everyone's nightmares, the harbinger of doom, the spawn from which rumors are bred. All starts to unfurl by the innocent, yet truthful words of a little girl.

The Characters - The Shadow Weaver, An Innocent Little Girl, and An Old Oak, with a magical energy. All are well-written and each one adds a creative, imaginative, and deeper meaning to your story.

The Setting - Your setting is filled with vivid descriptions and details that allow the reader to envision each scene as we read. Well done!

What I Liked Best - The complexity of your main character. The storyline and of course, the ending. I love that you used an ancient oak with magical properties and energy for the wisdom needed to change.

Thank you for sharing this fantastic story with us. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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