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 | House Of Black & White  [13+] Part of GoT  |
| (5.0)| A "Game of Thrones" review from The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Hello Gaby First impression: The House of Black and White is, just like its name, where the good get separated from the bad at the door. What works: "Opening" a door to find out what the next task is is not only visually attractive, but it also works as a double entendre for one of the Game of Thrones pieces of lore: how Hodor got his name. We even have one person who has to "open" a door for the rest of us to get through. What needs work: Once past the first three to five doors, it becomes a little tedious to have to count the doors out to click on the correct next one. It might be an idea to add either a number next to or on each door. Or name the doors and add that name on top of or below each door. Whoever opens the first five (5) doors unlocks all forums HOWEVER You must complete the challenge behind Door #1 before you can move to any other forum but only AFTER someone unlocks Door #5!  this is repetitive and confusing. It would be easier to only put: You must complete Door #1 before moving on to any other doors or forums. When I read that rule, I wondered whether I would have to go and check if/when/who opened Door #5 and the forums. When in reality, all I had to do was complete Door #1 and then keep working on the doors in order and check out the other forums for the challenges there.Final thoughts: This page is perfectly set up as the page that opens up all of the rest. I like that the challenges behind the doors are varied. They will get me to stretch myself as a writer. The addition of another activity that only opens up after Door #10 gives and ongoing incentive to keep opening doors.
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