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 My Rainbow Bunny Open in new Window. [E]
The gift that keeps giving...
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Review of My Rainbow Bunny  Open in new Window.
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A bright and colorful presentation we have here. I feel as though, however, it is hiding some kind of darkness within the soft pastel glow. We see a glimpse of the inconsiderate ways of nature, personified as uncaring parents who ignore the potential suffering of their offspring.

The connection to the subtitle is somewhat unclear: what exactly is “the gift that keeps on giving?” Is it the eternal changing of the seasons and the chain of life which continues from mother to child across species and down through the generations, bringing the cycles of nature and the environment into balance?

This does create a cute picture in my mind at the end, where I can imagine a pure white bunny sliding to a stop under the multicolored light of a rainbow, and the light turns him into a rainbow rabbit. You see such things sometimes on “cute animal videos,” where a critter discovers a prism or a rainbow sunbeam and basks in it.

I don’t quite understand the rainbow emerging “deep within a well…” is that supposed to have some significance? Sometimes poetry makes me feel as though I’m missing something, though I feel silly admitting it.

The rhythm and rhyme is good, and the poem flows along quite well, with almost a surrealist or “Alice in Wonderland” feel to it.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

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