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Hi Brenpoet

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title:Smitten with a Kitten

First Impression: I can relate to the bond we have with our cats. I have two adorable blush tabbies Macavity is 10 and Pumpkin is 2. They sleep with me every night. As I'm reading your poem Pumpkin is on the armrest and Macavity is behind my head. I'm well supervised.

I'm so sorry for your loss. And I'm sure Gobbolino was sent to help you with your pain.

What needs your attention: Ten lines have an end rhyme but the last two which throws the cadence off in your poem.

What part I liked best: Your kitten talks to you, that's definitely a sign from your daughter. His name is quite unusual.
My cats are boys, they prefer climbing and unwinding my yarn balls to being dressed up. Although they do tolerate my granddaughter dressing them for Halloween.

Overall impression: This was a twelve line poem about a special kitten that arrived when he was needed most to comfort a family after the loss of their daughter, Lucy. I believe animals find us when we need them the most as your beautiful black and white kitty did you.

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What does the Fox say?????


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