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Hi Beholden

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: A Thanksgiving Remembered

First Impression: Thanksgiving dinner I have learned to avoid, religion, political and freedom for the same exact reason the silence that follows is deafening.I stay with good family and friends, the opportunities I've had this year to write poetry. No one gets grumpy that way.

What needs your attention: This free style form gives the author leeway to express themselves. There's nothing I feel needs changing.

What part I liked best: I chcukled when I got to and I, being caught unprepared. Yup, been there too many times. One time to be funny, I grabbed a small notebook out of pocket and said, I've written it all down. My brother said, we're thankfull Lyn has her pencil and paper. Everyone laughed and he added his grateful contribution. I didn't have to add a thing. Perfect escape.

Overall impression: The free style poem allowed the author his own voice to tell about a family gathering as they wanted. The flow was smooth and the ending was perfect.

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What does the Fox say????? Write on.


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