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Floating on a Bubble  [E]
An mGur (Tibetan form) about the true meaning of vacations.
by Ben Langhinrichs
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Brilliant.

I mean, what more is there to say? Brilliant.

The title, brief description and especially the lovely cover pic led me to expect something a little mushy, warm, feel-good.

Instead you delivered what you'd promised you would - the 'true' meaning of a vacation, for you. As the responsible provider you have to think about the financial aspect and you've splashed it into the verse quite swimmingly. The two thoughts float together while staying distinct, which is quite an achievement.

A special shout out for the layout and the explanatory note at the end.

Swim On!
_ Sonali



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