"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Tracey

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Game of Thrones- House Lannister

First Impression: I've read some of your entries in your book. First of all, I must say how sorry I am about the loss of your grandson. It's not easy burying a grandchild. MY grandson was killed in 2019 and I haven't been the same since. Thanks for the update on Kit, I didn't know she moved to Scotland.

What needs your attention: I wouldn't change a thing, your entries are perfect the way they are.

What part I liked best: I enjoyed the tanka immensely. So true about leaving home everything does change. When I left Maine for New Jersey it was an eye opener. High speed internet, reliable cell service all the things I never had in rural Maine. When we decided to move from New Jersey, my friends tried to talk me into moving back. I spend two weeks and it was clear I was an outsider and the things I had grown accustomed to weren't available. So here I am 3000 miles across the country enjoying all the things I want.

I was pleased to see more poetry entries. Whoa, girl you do like the tankas. I would be nervous if my cats started talking. I'm sure I would get an earful.

Overall impression: It's a fun journal to read, You're a worthy opponent and ally.

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What does the Fox say????? Poetry is your jam, girl!


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