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![]() | Across the County Line ![]() Two old ladies and a treasure hunt at a general store ![]() |
Hi Amethyst Agape Angel ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Disclaimer The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. What I liked ... ![]() ![]() ![]() Suggestions: Not really suggestions; more like observations. I felt like you were teasing us about something to come when you wrote that Elsie and June realised they were the only females on the treasure hunt. It feels like quite a big deal is made of this, and I expected this to be key to the rest of the story. I was also curious to know why June needed the money (her reason for taking Elsie on this treasure hunt). Maybe it was simply that her old-age pension didn't stretch, but the way she mentioned it made me think there might be more to come about that. Parting comments: What is a Cracker Barell? I've never heard of one of those. I enjoyed this story a lot. These are two fantastic characters, and I could envisage them having many more adventures together. Choconut ![]() ![]()
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