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![]() | ruwth is writing... ![]() I will be adding stories & reflections as time marches on. Take a gander today! ![]() |
A "Game of Thrones" ![]() ![]() ![]() The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Hello ruwth ![]() I am here with a review for your entry in "I Write in 2024" ![]() First impression: I really like how you presented this piece. I like how I'm getting to know you more like this by coming in right after you for a second week. What works: The whole thing kind of just works. There aren't any spelling mistakes and because it's an experience rather than fiction there aren't any plot or other discrepancies to mention. What needs work: As this piece relates to your own experience, it would be nice to have more details to the different steps that you outlined in bold. Step One: Envision Your Dreams ![]() Step Two: Internalize Your Vision ![]() Step Three: Take Daily Steps ![]() Step Four: Push Through Obstacles ![]() Step Five: Relish Your Victories ![]() Final thoughts: Completing "I Write in 2024" ![]() ![]() ![]()
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