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My experience of going to a pub with my son
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Hi Sindbad

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Lucky Irish

First Impression: I chuckled because I took each of my sons when they were finally of legal age to our local bar. They both liked the drink choice I amde and recommended others for me to try. Yup, they had already been experimenting.

My whiskey of choice is Jameson's. The blended whiskey slides down so smooth and I can afford purchasing it more often than the Redbreast. Plus, they're Irish like me.

What needs your attention: I didn't see any spag as Joey likes to call spelling, grammar and punctuation issues.

What part I liked best: Not letting the Jameson or the Redbreast go to waste. I wish Redbreast wasn't so dang expensive. We have a bottle of the 12 year but drink it only on special occasions. By the time we finish it might be 27 years.
I agree with your son, not a beer drinker.

Overall impression: This was a delightful story about a father and son that this reader could relate to with her own experiences with her sons. It was engaging and held my interest from beginning to end.

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