"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Kiya

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Wonderland

First Impression: First, I want to say Mona would be very pleased with what you've created. There's so many awesome writing activities I'm regretting not signing up to do. But there was just too much happening in my personal life that I didn't feel I could commit. But then I wasn't going to do the games either and here I am. I'm definitely going to next year.

What needs your attention: I didn't see anything I would change. All the drop notes work perfectly and the graphics are awesome.

What part I liked best: The Pool of Tears I found appealing as did The Queens Croquet Ground. I could write a ton in both of those prompts.
How Doth The Little Crocodile by Lewis Carroll is a peom I've read to my grandchildren when they were younger.

Overall impression: This Wonderland experience encourages the author to write outside of their comfort zone in a encouraging environment as they progress in the game for the month. I read a couple of the different blogs and was impressed with their determination. Great choice of Judges, because they definitely had their work cut out for them.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


What does the Fox say?????