Hi Tracker! What a fun story! I'm so glad that happened upon this one and chose it to read! If I can make a suggestion, I would say to also add comedy genre, because I smiled the whole time I was reading it. What a great mood-lifter as I was enjoying my coffee! I would love to join the Hammock Haters Movement! LOL

With that said, I've never had the desire or the courage to attempt to try one out, and after reading your story about it, I probably never will.

I enjoyed reading all of the descriptions in your story. It made me recall strolling around in Playa Del Carmen, Mexico, and having several of the venders try to sell me hamacas. I was intrigued, but I wondered if it was a thing. Apparently from your story, it is. But who can actually use one of those correctly!

You gave good advice throughout, offering suggestions as to what people should choose to pass their time in the sunshine. I would also choose the lounge chair myself.

Your descriptions of the makings of a hammock were great. I could imagine, if I never saw one before, exactly what they look like. I also chuckled at how you mentioned greeting cards like to pose a retired person sitting in a hammock. By the way, the little image in the brief introduction is cute as well, and sets the scene for the story.

The unsuspecting user is really in for a shocking surprise when he tries to get out of one. Hey, according to your fun writing, he might not ever get into one to begin with! That would be me - no, I'd be in the comfortable chaise lounge!

I felt that it was nice of you to add a link to the activity at the bottom, but sadly, that item is no longer valid. The thought was there, but perhaps you should remove the link and have this cute story stand alone.

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