Greetings Chrys O'Shea !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


"I May Be Different" dives into the raw wounds of rejection and the resilience required to find self-acceptance. The poem opens with a disarming honesty, the speaker entering the world "imperfect and confused" by the inexplicable act of being ostracized. The emphasis is on their inherent normalcy – they dream, cry, and love, fundamental human experiences that transcend difference. This universality is shattered by the harsh reality of being shunned and mocked for "physical shortcomings." The poem doesn't shy away from the emotional weight of these experiences. The stark juxtaposition of "shunned, teased" with the dehumanizing label of "freak" paints a vivid picture of the speaker's emotional landscape, one marked by isolation and the sting of rejection.

The poem takes a powerful turn in the final lines, shifting from vulnerability to quiet strength. The speaker achieves their dreams, soaring metaphorically "high" above the negativity they faced. They find joy and personal fulfillment, a stark contrast to the rejection they endured. The language here is evocative, with verbs like "soar," "dance," and "rejoice" suggesting a sense of liberation and a newfound embrace of life.

The final image adds another layer of meaning. The speaker looks back and sees those who rejected them, still "different" in their inability to embrace acceptance. This isn't a vengeful look, but rather one of quiet understanding. The speaker has transcended the pain and carved their own path to belonging, leaving those who couldn't accept them behind. They've moved beyond the need for external validation, finding their own strength and inner peace. The power of this image lies in its subtlety. It suggests that the speaker has not only achieved their dreams but has also grown emotionally, replacing bitterness with a quiet confidence.

"I May Be Different" is a well-crafted poem that packs an emotional punch. It utilizes strong imagery and evocative language to capture the speaker's journey. The poem doesn't shy away from the darkness of rejection but ultimately celebrates the power of self-acceptance and the triumph of the human spirit. It leaves the reader with a sense of hope and the reminder that true strength lies in embracing your own unique journey, a journey that can lead to a place of acceptance, both for oneself and for the limitations of others. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic