Greetings Princess Megan Snow Rose !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


The poem "Epitaphs" delves into the life of Gertrude, an unconventional soul who made a living writing epitaphs. The poem's fragmented style, with its short, choppy lines, mirrors Gertrude's own blunt and perhaps cynical humor. We see a diverse range of people she commemorated, from the virtuous ("good" and "honest") to the downright unsavory ("scum") and those who simply couldn't quite fit in ("didn't seem to blend"). These epitaphs become a window into Gertrude's worldview, hinting at a darkly comedic outlook.

However, the poem also reveals a subtle tenderness beneath the surface. We learn about Gertrude's husband's infidelity and a "bad divorce," suggesting emotional hardships she endured. Despite these challenges, Gertrude perseveres, finding solace and even joy in her work. The poem describes writing epitaphs as her "hobby," implying a sense of personal fulfillment beyond just a job. Her talent lies in crafting witty and humorous epitaphs, a way to celebrate or perhaps even subvert the lives of those who have passed.

"Epitaphs" also ponders the nature of legacy. While these short inscriptions serve as memorials for others, they become a way for Gertrude to connect with them on a deeper level and leave her own unique mark on the world. The poem ends with a heartfelt tribute to Gertrude herself, acknowledging how much she'll be missed, especially her "laugh." This final line adds a layer of warmth and underscores the vibrancy of her personality.

The poem's closing line, which calls Gertrude a "hottie," is jarring in its tone. While it might feel out of place next to the genuine sentiment expressed earlier, it could be interpreted in a few ways. It might be a reflection of how others perceived her – a complex woman with a surprising profession and an infectious zest for life. Alternatively, it could be a touch of dark humor, a final chuckle from Gertrude herself, acknowledging the absurdity of some social conventions even in the face of death. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!


Best regards,
Gervic