Greetings Emerick - The Preacher !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


This poem, titled "Good Morning," transcends the realm of a typical greeting, transforming a daily occurrence into a potent symbol of potential. It begins with a subtle critique, questioning if a simple "Good Morning" is sufficient to confront the complexities of life. The poem then swiftly dismantles this complacency, unveiling a deeper truth about mornings.

The language goes beyond mere pleasantries. It employs powerful metaphors like "gateway" and "seed" to depict mornings as portals to personal growth. These metaphors paint a vivid picture – mornings are not just the start of a new day, but fertile ground brimming with the potential for self-improvement and achievement. The poem doesn't shy away from acknowledging challenges, but instead positions them as hurdles to be overcome with the courage and strength fostered by a fresh start. This shift from acknowledging darkness to embracing a chance to "win the fight" imbues the poem with a sense of empowerment.

The structure reinforces this message. The poem progresses from questioning the adequacy of a greeting to a powerful call to action. There's a clear shift in tone as the poem unfolds. The initial skepticism gives way to a compelling urge for the reader to "listen close" and recognize the potential each morning holds. The use of imperative verbs like "embrace" and "rise" further emphasizes this call to action. The final lines don't just celebrate the start of a new day, but the abundance of possibilities it brings – a chance to love, to live, and to thrive.

"Good Morning" is a well-crafted and inspiring poem. It encourages the reader to look beyond the routine and find strength, purpose, and the potential for a fulfilling life within the daily cycle of mornings. The poem's effectiveness lies in its ability to elevate the ordinary, transforming a simple greeting into a powerful reminder of the potential for growth and renewal that lies within each new day. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic