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![]() | The War Next Door ![]() A rivalry among neighbors. Writer's Cramp entry. ![]() |
Hello Jeff You are receiving this review of "The War Next Door" ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, you've created a suspenseful and well-crafted story with strong character development and a compelling narrative. With some refinement in character motivations and dialogue, it could be even more impactful. I know this originally written as a contest entry for The Writer's Cramp and was under the constraint of the prompt and word limitation. Therefore, I have only provided suggestions on improvement should you wish to explore and expand the narrative beyond the scope of a contest entry and turn it into a fully-functional and unconstrained short story. Write on! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Let your imagination run wild. Set your creativity free. We are the Free Folk. And we do not kneel. DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions expressed within this review are the sole product of the reviewer. They do not necessarily reflect those of the group, activity and/or event in which they are affiliated. Any implementation of suggested edits is at the sole discretion of the piece's writer; they may be used when and where deemed necessary by the writer of the piece and/or disregarded in their entirety. The reviewer releases any and all rights and/or claims to those suggestive edits should they be utilized by the writer of the piece. ![]() ![]()
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