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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Open in new Window. [13+]
It is a wonderful feeling to help out a loved one,but, wait to see what happens next.
by Ẃeβ࿚Ẃỉtcĥ Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Ẃeβ࿚Ẃỉtcĥ! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* This was a great read. I had a couple of laugh-out-loud moments. I have to hand it to you and your son. You two really worked your butts off! I'm sure dear old Mom appreciated it.

It's important to help and be there for family. Though, it's not necessarily what we always want to do, it's important to do so anyway.

The Title and Description - Excellent title. It fits the story perfectly. Your description is a hint of the humor that lies inside your writing.

The Storyline/Plot - Your writing shows the good relationship between you and your son. It's heart-warming to see you both tackling your elderly mother's apartment. I laughed out loud about the sheets at the hotel. Why does that happen? They should really invest in deeper pocket sheets. That way they can advertise that with their advertisement about how crisp they are. (They are great. I love the feel of linen sheets, and have a couple of them myself).

The Setting - The washing machine incident was another laugh-out-loud moment. That just had to happen on that particular day, didn't it? *Laugh* I have the deep one without the middle agitator. I'm so short I have to get something to stand on to get the last few pieces of clothes. (Or use one of those graspers), lol

At least it sounded like ate some good food. That's always a plus. *Delight*

Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed it. Thanks for the laughs!

*Heart* Tracey


"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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