"The Iron Bank of Braavos"  "Game of Thrones" 

My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Beagle Pain Syndrome

First Impression: Dallas wouldn't eat Sunday night and Friday morning was blind. The symptoms kept getting worse. Then it goes on to define Beagle Pain Syndrome. Then it covers the fateful days when Dallas was ill and in need of attention. The misdiagnosis before coming to the conclusion that it's the Beagle Pain Syndrome that Dallas was suffering and started treatment for that. I'm glad that Dallas got better and whenever a relapse happened that there was medicine for him to take to get better once again.

Nice poem creating a thorough awareness of the disease. I wouldn't have guessed what the illness would have been right off the bat. The battle to make Dallas better sounds like a long one and well worth it. I love the details that are involved. Just the right amount of details to explain what to look for like loss of appetite and lethargy and struggle to overcome the steps. Doesn't like to be picked up. The hunch is a trademark of the disease too. There were many new things I learned as I read this story. I haven't seen it happen in action myself but I believe you.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

What part I liked best: Dallas got the proper treatment eventually and started behaving like a normal dog as if he never was seriously ill. Lived to be 18 years old.

Overall impression: This poem definitely creates awareness of a serious illness that causes blindness in dogs. Dallas was one of them. After much struggle with the illness things worked out and he lived a long life happy and ill free from this disease. Great job getting it all taken care of. That must be a proud moment. Illnesses can be overcome. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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What does the Fox say?????

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