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 | MATCHBOX UNDIES  [13+] What was the one thing my Barbie's wardrobe lacked??  |
| (4.5)| GAMES OF THRONES STORY REVIEW In conjunction with:   This is a review for "MATCHBOX UNDIES" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE STORYA girl and her Barbie have a lot in common except for...  WHAT I LIKEDI picked the story because of the title. Then I read the tag line and I said I had to read this one - it sounds like a hoot! And it was! I enjoyed it very much.  POV NARRATION/TENSEThis is told in the first person by a female narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. DESCRIPTIONSThere's enough to set the scenes. I liked: "Being understandably minuscule and almost microscopic ,of Barbie-doll proportions, the lingerie would have to be smaller than a thimble; perhaps nickel-sized, dime-sized?" -- I could easily visualize this in my imagination. SETTINGTIME: contemporary - 1960's PLACE: urban setting This is something that is clarified for the reader. CHARACTERSFemale narrator & Barbie Our narrator loves her Barbie doll and there's nothing with that. Barbie and the narrator have a lot of adventures - to include clothing adventures.  MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader. A fun story with several comedic beats that will make one laugh.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"  Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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You responded to this review 04/13/2024 @ 11:03am EDT