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 MATCHBOX UNDIES Open in new Window. [13+]
What was the one thing my Barbie's wardrobe lacked??
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Reading* THE STORY

A girl and her Barbie have a lot in common except for...

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I picked the story because of the title. Then I read the tag line and I said I had to read this one - it sounds like a hoot! And it was! I enjoyed it very much.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person by a female narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scenes. I liked: "Being understandably minuscule and almost microscopic ,of Barbie-doll proportions, the lingerie would have to be smaller than a thimble; perhaps nickel-sized, dime-sized?" -- I could easily visualize this in my imagination.

*Star* SETTING

TIME: contemporary - 1960's
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Female narrator & Barbie

Our narrator loves her Barbie doll and there's nothing with that. Barbie and the narrator have a lot of adventures - to include clothing adventures. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader. A fun story with several comedic beats that will make one laugh.

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Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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