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 {O#T Distant clouds and Purple skies] Open in new Window. [E]
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by Mary Ann MCPhedran Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I found this using the Random Read and Review button. A lovely little poem we have here, full of light and color. I love a good descriptive nature poem, and this has such a soft, peaceful flow to the meter. With just a few simple words you’ve painted a glowing image of the sunrise that fills the sky with purple clouds.

Your formatting is a bit messy, as we see one couplet collided into a single line. You should treat this item not as a casual throwaway, but as a complete piece in your portfolio. I would recommend using size 4 Verdana font, centering the text, and adding three relevant genres, such as “Experience,” “Nature,” and “Inspirational.” This will help bring visibility to the poem. You can also include a line count and consider entering it into "First and Second Chance Poetry Contest" Open in new Window., which takes old and new items without a prompt requirement.

As one who loves poetry yet dabbles only cautiously in it, I’m not qualified to advise you on form or structure. I go mainly by instinct, and I know a good poem when I see one. This would look lovely written out on high quality paper in a fancy script handwriting to frame and hang on the wall or use as a gift.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

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