Hi Beholden! Ah, I enjoyed your sweet poem about Christmas in July. I enjoy rhyming poems, and this one was fun to read because of the rhyming couplets. Your poem made me think of Summer and Christmas, and wish for both at the same time! The best of both worlds for sure..

I'll have to say, I chuckled when I saw the image which you chose to put in your brief introduction. It was clever to put a beach/summer picture there rather than a Christmas tree, because it has a fun look to it next to the Christmassy title!

Your poem is presented well. Thank you for putting your poem in bold font. I can see it well and the colored prompt words pop nicely throughout.

I liked that you gave information at the bottom. It's clear to see that you have couplet stanzas in your poem, but some people might not recognize that, so it's great to have it readily available. Of course, the other information about the prompt is a terrific addition as well.

I had so much fun, honestly, reading your poem. Aside from the smooth rhyme, which I adored, I thought you came up with the greatest lines to write. My favorite was the line about what type of tree would be had.
I wanted to say..Oooh, oooh, a Palm tree!! That would be nice! Though my people in Florida use regular Christmas trees. How uncreative! LOL
I liked your line about the socks. I'm guilty of occasionally giving socks! But I do like to give better things along with them. Your stanza did bring back fun memories. Thanks for putting this humourous poem together.

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