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Bubba's Corner BBQ ![]() Trying to give a tourist directions to Bubba's ![]() |
Hi 👼intuey ![]() This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" ![]() ![]() Overall Impression: Well, this wasn't the easiest prompt to write for. I wondered what you'd do with it, and I have to say that this took quite a creative turn! A tourist is looking for a particular restaurant. They figure it must be on a corner, because of its name - Bubba's Corner BBQ. Well, it used to be, and the reason for why it isn't there any longer is a well-described scene that could easily belong in a comedy movie - one thing leads to another and everything goes from bad to worse until, yes, one can understand why the restaurant now exists elsewhere. I have to say that I am glad that the old hog is okay! Lucky escape there! This was a fun read. I could clearly picture the scene. Well done! Suggestions: Paragraph 4: I only have one suggestion, Tracey: ![]() The repetition of 'that hog' stood out to me. Perhaps the second instance can be changed to it? My Rating: This is a fun response to a tricky prompt. I enjoyed the read. I did have one suggestion, but nothing major. For that reason, I will give this item a rating of 4.5 out of 5. Thank you for sharing your work. Write on! Kit ![]() ![]() The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. ![]() ![]()
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