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 |  | Death Chamber  [13+] An Undertaker knows too much about Death  |
| (4.5)| Hello W.D.Wilcox! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" . Hey Bill! I hope you're doing well. It's been a while since I've visited your port. It's good to read another one of your stories. I always enjoy them!I was so afraid of what might be coming. Poor little guy. He trusted the wrong person. The only good thing is he didn't have to face the one he feared the most! I'm sure he would have much rather have the ending he had, than the one he could have had!  The Title and Description - Great title that grabbed my attention. The fabulous description urged me to read on! The Characters - Your story has two main characters. The policeman and the undertaker. The dialogue spoken between the two of them brings the reader into their world. It shows the fear of the undertaker of the one who used to be his best friend and of the cockiness and ego of the policeman. The Plot/Storyline - Is strong and creative. It is well thought out, and well-written. The Setting - You do a great job on the setting. It is easy to envision each scene as we read. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. I truly enjoyed it! I hope to see you around more.   Tracey"A Lannister Always Pays Their Debts!" "When you play the game of thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/12/2024 @ 3:52pm EDT