Hi Intuey! I don't know if I've ever been to this fundraiser before, but I figure I'll give it some pretty stars. Being a dog owner, I like the name of the activity, and I love the little dog pictured in the brief introduction. I notice that there is a lucky dog merit badge associated with the prize, which makes your activity even more interesting.

I wasn't a fan of the people and the raffle tickets at the top image, but I really love the dog image! He reminds me, just a bit, of the dog from 'Little Orphan Annie'. The other has people smaller than the raffle tickets. I think I would have rather see just the tickets at the top, but in the end, it really doesn't make a difference what images are used when people are looking for tickets to send out.

Overall, I think your heading was presented well, and I found it easy to follow.

At a thousand gift points for each ticket, I don't think it's a low price, but it doesn't seem too unreasonable as that's basically the common price most people use in all the raffles.

All in all, I'd like to say that you did this well. It seems to be an ongoing raffle, which is good because I have no doubt people will grow to use it as their, 'go-to' place to buy little gift prizes.
Also, it has a very neat and understandable look to it.

In addition, it's so sweet of your to rotate the groups which will benefit. This will probably get your activity noticed by more people.

I liked that you reminded people that they can buy tickets for themselves as well as to be given as gifts. I thought it was smart to even add that they can give these tickets out anonymously and you gave instructions for that, too. Some people don't think of such things, so it was good to bring it to their attention.

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