"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Jeff, yup scoping out the competition

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Scrivenings of the King-Beyond the Wall

First Impression: You've written a lot for the Game of Thrones thus far. I think you might be in this to win. I read a few of your pieces and I'm hoping you draw them out further as static items. Fantasies and Fairytales number five I think wants to go longer than what is written. Stolen artifacts number five also feels like the story has just begun.

What needs your attention: I see nothing. Like Joey says no spag issues.

What part I liked best: New Orleans number one. That poem says so much more than the thirteen well chosen words. It reminded me of my best cheerleader with my writing was grandson. He died in a dirt bike accident in 2019 at the tender age of 13. But before his passing, he was asking about poems I had written about Halloween. He always wanted more. He's on the other side and I'm here, trying to honor him. He would have liked your mirror mirror prompt 2 a lot.

Overall impression: The author has been very productive in the Game of Thrones.

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What does the Fox say????? I'm not ready to bow, yet.


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