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AC / DC High Voltage Open in new Window. [GC]
Where music moves me. Here are my stories. Album #1
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         Review for entry/chapter: "It's A Long Way To The Top" Open in new Window.
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Rated: GC | (5.0)
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Storyline: Camron wakes in a hotel room, with a sleeping woman beside him. He tries to connect the dots to the night before, but the hangover is front and center. He gets out of bed, taking his pants and wallet with him, hoping the groupie will leave, only to return to find her and her brother waiting. Luckily for Camron, Jackson hears the commotion and comes to the rescue to break up the fight and get the guy out of the room as the police arrive.

Spelling/Grammar Issues: *Thumbsupl*

Description/emotion: It was easy to connect with Camron, his life on the road, and how he felt about these encounters with women. The fight scene was good, from discovering the girl's brother in the room to the guy's anger, seeing the brass knuckles reflect the light as a warning to Camron, and each blow. As a true rock artist, Camron quickly says he can wear his shades on stage to cover his bruised eye.

Overall Impression: Nice job with the AC/DC song choice and prompt. Reading this had the music playing in the back of my mind that the fight ensued between Camron and Mr. Brass Knuckles. I loved that term for him and couldn't resist. True to the rock 'n roll lore, they pack up and head off to the next performance.




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