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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Creeper Of The Realm

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: Poetry Week 31 The Wooden Bridge

Hi Amy: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I have always liked wooden bridges and I am sad that they have taken away the wooden bridge. I like to daydream that trolls live under them. I was drawn to this and decided to give this a looksie and a review with my findings and observations. Indiana has a whole town full of wooden bridges. I have yet to visit there. I live in Indiana. I was happy I found this.

What needs your attention: I thought this could use an extra stanza. Does it have otters in the water? Ducks visiting? I guess I like animals in the items I write. No errors or typos.

What part I liked best: Bridge is built and newly painted. The river is sturdy. Crossings are easier. Fishing, playing. splashing. Rivers are known for those things. Steady beams. I feel like I was there and could see this. You bring out the beauty in this piece.

Overall Impression: Good descriptions. Nice scenery. Easy to follow. A good style. Creative and colorful. Well defined.
I smiled as I read this. Looks like this was fun to write. Impressive.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and do not therefore reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated within. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for letting me review your work. This has been my pleasure.