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A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi Itchybarn: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: Christmas Eve With Cats

First Impression: I lover cats and Christmas. I saw a story about cats and Christmas. Yes! I am there. I started to read and I enjoyed the story line and concept. I wanted to review this. You are a young writer and I appreciate this. Getting started writing early in life is a good thing. I like when animals talk and act like humans, so I found a story I wanted to read.

What needs your attention: Nothing really. Looks like you got this and went over everything. You kept it interesting. It made me smile.

The part I liked best: The cats planting a dead mouse so Santa would find it. I appreciate the humor. Santa wasn't mad. He loved meeting the cats. He knew the cats had planted the dead mouse o purpose so they could see him. The cats wanting cat nip. So cute. Said they like to throw up in different places. Maybe they know my cat.

Overall Impression: Talking cats are cute. Well written dialogue. Creative and colorful. A good imagination at work. A nice style and entertaining. The Christmas Tree cover art is cute. The cats get to ride with Santa and help deliver gifts. I love this story.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated within. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.