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Castle Open in new Window. [E]
A silly poem about living in a house made of rocks.
by Mikibits Author Icon
Review of Castle  Open in new Window.
Review by Kenzie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I found your work of heart on the public reviews page. It's always fun to see if one agrees or disagrees with the previous reviewer. Turned out that I both agreed and didn't agree.

This was fun to read aloud. While reading it silently, I could understand why the previous reviewer said that the meter makes one stumble. But reading aloud fixed that. It sounded great. Good flow, good rhymes, and makes a person laugh. What more could anyone want?

Thanks for sharing.

Blessings,
Kenzie

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