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Love's Dancing Petals  Open in new Window. [E]
A poem for my partner
by Conorwriting Author Icon
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Conorwriting, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Love's Dancing Petals " Open in new Window. by Conorwriting

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A declaration of loyalty to a lifetime partner. Well written with a unique rhyming pattern that gives a steady flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A beautiful picture of times landscape is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can see in the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Conorwtiting, Thank you for sharing this delightful poem, is a joy to read. Write On!

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