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Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Sun* I came across your story while reading through the Quill nominations! I'm glad I could finally stop by and give it a rating. My first impression after the first read was just how funny it was from the beginning to the very end. I didn't get stuck anywhere or see any typos--just a clean read with a ton of laughs a long the way. *Stary*

*Sun* Comedy is my favorite genre, so I was on the lookout for some laughs. I didn't have to read too far into the story, when it took a funny turn to talking about rhubarb. What so funny about that? It's hilarious because it's a plant/fruit no one ever talks about, and the randomness of it made me laugh out loud. Especially, when we have a character like Kevin who has a cunning plan to make a lot of money to fill the land with rhubarb plants. *Rolling* The reason why it fails is also hilarious.

*Sun* While I'm recovering from that scene, I stumble onto something that will keep me laughing for a long time. The scene after this *Pointright* Kevin looked at the mermen before answering, "Look, do you mind if I ask your males to face the sea? It's probably best I don't describe the 'clear' visual I got from it. Hilarious!

*Sun* The whole concept is funny, and I have to say, kudos to you for thinking it up. It's one entertaining story and one I'll not forget for a while. Thank YOU for the laughs, and keep writing the funny stuff! *Bigsmile*

*Swords* Lornda


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