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 Thunder, Thunder in the Hills Open in new Window. [E]
Lannister soldiers spot a dragon in the distance.
by StephBee Author Icon
Review by NaNoKit Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi StephBee Author Icon,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window. [13+]. *Smile*

Overall Impression:

As this had Lannister soldiers in the brief description, and I am a member of House Lannister, I naturally had to check out this poem! Unfortunately, things do not turn out so well for us Lannisters. Such is the Game of Thrones!

Now, usually I am not very fond of poems that contain repetition, but I like it here. It's like the beating of a dragon's wings, which suits the poem and suits your being a member of House Targaryen. It's how I imagine the rhythm, those wing beats, and that adds to the feel of the approaching dragon - the danger getting ever closer until it can no longer be avoided and devastation reigns.

It's scary to imagine, isn't it? I love dragons, but it would be very frightening watching one come at me with less-than-kind intent. I'd rather befriend them!

Lots of imagery here. Well done!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, dear Steph. Not helpful, I know, but the spelling's fine, the grammar's fine, the rhythm and rhyme are fine - everything works. Again, well done!

My Rating:

Even though my House is in quite a bit of trouble here, I enjoyed this poem. It's cleverly written.

I had no suggestions. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work.

Write on!

Kit

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