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![]() | Thunder, Thunder in the Hills ![]() Lannister soldiers spot a dragon in the distance. ![]() |
Hi StephBee ![]() This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" ![]() ![]() Overall Impression: As this had Lannister soldiers in the brief description, and I am a member of House Lannister, I naturally had to check out this poem! Unfortunately, things do not turn out so well for us Lannisters. Such is the Game of Thrones! Now, usually I am not very fond of poems that contain repetition, but I like it here. It's like the beating of a dragon's wings, which suits the poem and suits your being a member of House Targaryen. It's how I imagine the rhythm, those wing beats, and that adds to the feel of the approaching dragon - the danger getting ever closer until it can no longer be avoided and devastation reigns. It's scary to imagine, isn't it? I love dragons, but it would be very frightening watching one come at me with less-than-kind intent. I'd rather befriend them! Lots of imagery here. Well done! Suggestions: I have no suggestions, dear Steph. Not helpful, I know, but the spelling's fine, the grammar's fine, the rhythm and rhyme are fine - everything works. Again, well done! My Rating: Even though my House is in quite a bit of trouble here, I enjoyed this poem. It's cleverly written. I had no suggestions. Therefore, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5. Thank you for sharing your work. Write on! Kit ![]() ![]() The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. ![]() ![]()
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