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 The Long Night Open in new Window. [13+]
A story of revenge
by Hyperiongate Author Icon
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Review by jaya Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Creepy and interesting.
Chester's wages of sin is well paid.
Both characters are impressively depicted.

The setting has as much to tell about the events. The ill gotten valley and the mine owned by a greedy man create eerie environment.

Personification of greed in Chester shows how cruel and selfish it can be.

The sudden wind and the "whisper" answered his long wait for Sammy's ghost.
"Do you believe in ghosts?”

When it comes to story telling, Hyperiongate is undoubtedly first among equals.

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