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Hi KingsSideCastle

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Chasm

First Impression: This was scary reminder of what can happen when you hike alone. It's important to let someone know where you're going to be, even if it's a note inside your car on the dash. Rangers do check those things.
I didn't hike very often but I did manage to get myself turned around and needed help getting myself back out In Acadia National Park. I had left a note on the rangers bulletin board noting what trail I was taking.

What needs your attention: I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation errors. Kudo.

What part I liked best: I thought Alexis reliving moments in her life would be something any one stranded would do. I chuckled when she got to her Mom. I've told my children the same thing life is hard, nothing comes easy and no matter the struggle it will be worth it.

Overall impression: The author gave a realistic reminder of the hazards of climbing alone. We as the reader had a first hand glimpse of her struggle once she fell into the sink hole and how she overcame the obstacles. The pacing is good. Alexis felt realistic.

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