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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes. Title: To Robin Williams First Impression: A poem dedicated to the death of a celebrity comedian? Well, why not. I admired his talent, too and cannot comprehend his death. Why does it happen too often that the truly gifted die far too young? This is heartfelt. He did make quite the impression on his fans. I like that you compare this to two other spectacular phenomenon, the sun and the moon. This is the idea that everyone in the world sees and shares both of these. What needs your attention: Nothing whatsoever. What part I liked best: I appreciate your rhyme. This poem flows smoothly. The phrasing, the words are not forced. You did not need to go into detail about Robin's demise. The suddenness of it is accentuated by your spare words and descriptions. "Farewell a friend of laughter bold He left too soon he could not hold." This sums his body of work up, bold comedy. My eldest grandgiggle's favourite Robin Williams movie is the first Jumanji. She viewed it over and over again with the stereo blaring the stampeding elephants. The best, funniest scene is his character trapped in the attic floor and blowing at the spiders. Who can or will forget Mrs. Doubtfire? The comedy was brilliant. Yes, we will "mourn him as we gaze the moon." Overall Impression: This poem made me sad, yet I smiled. Would such a feeling man wish for us to grieve too much? He enjoyed making people laugh and I shall always be grateful to him for that. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been a pleasure. What does the fox say??? Listen carefully. (1752 characters) DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.