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A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: 2023: The Not So New Year

Hi Huntersmoon: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: 2023. We hope each year will be better. After 2020, the years haven't been good. I wanted to read this and see what you had to say. The calendar has turned it's page. A new year released from it's cage. These lines invited me to read this poem. Tempests and storms. That's what the years. My interest is peaked so I am reading this and giving you my thoughts.

What needs your attention: I was hoping to see something written about 2020 and how things worked out up to now. Writing about 2023 is the subject so I guess we forget the past years and go forward.

What part I liked best: I'd still have journeyed to the end enjoying every twist and bend. To one promise, I am true to always embrace what is new. Tomorrow, it will all be gone yet I will still be moving on. I like these lines. Some god reflections and we do move forward.

Overall Impression: These lines make you think. We have hopes, dreams and promises for the new year and you wrapped these up on these verses. A Neat rhyme pattern balances this out. You can tell you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out and gives this a good flair.

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