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Confessions of a Coffee Convict  [E]
Life support in a small brown bean. A Poetic Traditions Entry (Form: Sestet)
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Title: Confessions Of A Coffee Addict

Hi Huntersmoon: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I am a Diet Pepsi Addict. I know people love coffee. I like to read why people love coffee and what makes them tick. I saw this and smiled. I thought alright. I will read do. I can get in tune with this. I awake to the fragrant air that welcomes me everyday. I thought I will read this. I will give my views.

What needs your attention: Do you like chocolate in your coffee, sugar and cream or just like it straight? I was curious about this part.

What part I liked best: It's a promise of what will be there. Coffee does that for you. Drinking coffee to stay sane. Good call. My mood is sponsored by coffee. We need something to help suppress our mood. A day without coffee is.. I have no idea. I had to laugh at this. I like you said my morning diose of caffeine. I get why you like coffee.

Overall Impression: A good style and I appreciate the humor in there. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern pulls this off with a good bounce, nice flair and a good concept. Creative, colorful and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Entertaining.

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