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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: Journey

Hi Huntersmoon: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: Journey. It can be a trip or about life and issues we encounter. This is about autumn and a forest and walking along the path. This is cheery and friendly as well as warm and invites the reader in. I wanted to read this. I feel like I am entering a forest and I had to see what awaits me. The path meanders through the changing wood. I like this line. I am on a journey with this poem and want to give you my observations.

What needs your attention: I was hoping to see a stanza with squirrels, deer, birds or some other forest animals visiting. I love animals. Everything else falls into place.

What part I liked best: I would not forsake this long walk if I could for in my heart I know that I belong. The leaves have turned and autumn has arrived. I like the reference to God. Walking in the woods with a lover and friend is the best kind of bond.

Overall Impression: This is serene and peaceful. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern suits this and gives this a good flair as it makes the words stand out. I felt like I was there. Creative and well defined.

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