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Love's Dancing Petals  Open in new Window. [E]
A poem for my partner
by Conorwriting Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Morning, Conorwriting Author Icon

Very romantic, past tense poem about the feelings and imagery associated with love. It's sweet to want to share such feelings, and the small flowers and petals they shed were truly poetic. I have no suggestions this is so well done, and just want to share that I enjoyed this, and could really feel what you were expressing for your partner.
There are thoughts that drift away,
Of these endless, numbered days,
the greatest gift, I've ever known,
to love you in your ways.

Excepting a person as they are and receive the same is love, thanks for sharing your feelings and leaving me content. Welcome to WDC.

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