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Fall Open in new Window. [E]
An essay, I wrote a few years, ago! I got an A! ♥
by Abbey Genna Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Abbey Genna

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion, courtesy of the "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window. activity.


*Penw* Positives

You did a great job of capturing the essence of the Fall season. It's my favorite time of year as well, and you described many of the things I love about it, transporting the reader to that time of year. I particularly liked your transition between the cool and crispness of the outdoors with the warmth and coziness of the indoors. Nice work!


*Penw* Suggestions

I don't have any particular suggestions for improvement; I thought you did a great job. *Smile*


*Penw* Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this item and the best compliment I can give it is that it made me yearn for Fall again, even though it's six months away! *Bigsmile*


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