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Dreams of the Everyday Housewife  [E]
My views and a married woman's daydreams.
by Snow Princess Megan Rose
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Snow Princess Megan Rose! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Review. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I loved your honesty and imagination! I'd forgotten all about that Glen Campbell song--Dreams of the Everyday Housewife. I think I'll look it up on my laptop and play it. *Smile* I see you wrote this in your forties, about twenty years ago. We must be close to the same age. I definitely connect with the names you mentioned.

         *Bulletg* This is so true: We all love to daydream. For those of us who write romance and fictional, you have to use your imagination. I like this because as writers, we put ourselves in our characters' shoes.


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Paragraph 4: *Right* It gets through me housework. I wonder if you just accidently switched your words around? It gets me through housework.

         Other than that little hiccup, it all looks great!


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         Sounds to me like you have a happy life, imagination and all! *Smile* I enjoyed the read.


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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