Hi Jaeyne of the Free Fab Five -

This is a "Game of Thrones"  review by House Martell.

The views and opinion on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity, and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinions and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

The reason I chose this particular story/poem: I chose this particular piece because it was recommended by another Game of Thrones player.

My opinion of said story/poem: This is only my second word search I have ever done and reviewed on WDC. And, now, I realize that it is not an error of sorts: when you push the solve button, the puzzle does not actually get solved. That's just the way it is. Odd, their programing can solve a crossword but not a word search. It is always good to know these things, for when I decide to make my own word search.

The description of the puzzle is nice, succinct, and to the point. However, it could use some jazzing up. Increase the font, add some color, add some emoticons, something to make it more enticing. You want to draw people in, make them want to do your word search. Use all your story writing skills, sharpen those salesman skills, and make people somehow think that your word search is the most awesome thing happening.

Conclusion: Word searches are fun and provide many hours of entertainment. I'm not sure I, myself, can get behind one on the computer that you can't actually solve without printing it out.

Keep up the good work!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina




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