Hi Aennaytte: Free & Wild in GoT -

THis is a "Game of Thrones"  review for House Martell.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity, and /or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinions and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

The reason I chose this particular story/poem: I chose this particular piece because it was recommended to me by another Game of Thrones player.

My opinion of said story/poem: I like it. It's cute, it's fun, there's just a couple of things to hash out:

"Grinding, steaming, house filling aroma". I'm still trying to figure out how the coffee can be grinding and steaming at the same time. If you were roasting the beans then that might be a possibility, but then, you wouldn't be drinking it. I think maybe you want, "Freshly ground, steaming, house filling aroma". Then you can drink it! LOL

That editor cannot be very bright if he has no idea that those emails are not even being opened. {your email will tell you if your emails are being opened by the recipient, if you set it up correctly).

Conclusion: A wonderful little piece about following ones own heart, ones own dreams, and ignoring all nay sayers regardless of who they may be.

I enjoyed the little excerpt about the editor not using paper mail to inform the writer he needed to start using email, in other words, go paperless. It was a fun little commentary about modern times versus just twenty years ago.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina




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