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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi Webwitch. I am Megan one of the sly foxes.

Title: I Hate Early Morning Visitors

First Impression: Our favorite Detective is back. Marshall Fields. I know this place. I shopped there once I was drawn to this because it is a murder mystery. I read one about this detective before so I thought I would see what he is going to do this time. I thought I would give you some views.

What needs your attention: Since this man is a Detective, I wondered why he hates anyone wearing a badge when he carries a badge as well? They are all on the same team.

What part I liked best: Estelle wanted to kill Lenny and the Detective tried to talk her out of it and he ended up killing the man because the man would have killed the detective and Estelle both. The detective has a thing for Gloria from Part One. A potential romance. We all know how I like romance.

Overall Impression: The detective never has a boring day it seems. Always suspense and drama. Runs into damsels in distress and helps them out. Guess he likes to work alone and not with other policemen. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style and easy to follow. You keep the story interesting. I enjoyed reading this.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated within. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for letting me review your work. It was my pleasure.